Pg 4: Some messengers are asking to be shot
So, the messenger delivers her message (if you thought she was a man you are forgiven. I drew her pretty androgynous to add to her mystery. But in page 1, frame 8 you can see the curve of her left boobie). In case you haven’t guessed she is a lead-in character, and you probably won’t see her again. That said she has quite a strong personality and I will miss her. She is determined and practical.
Not there are a lot of mistakes on this page. “Shoot mess-anger” is one, Tinuvielle’s left arm is another. I won’t point out the others. Perhaps you won’t notice them. Mistake fixed!
GUARD: I will take it... once the ceremony is over.
MESSENGER: But... is urgent! TAKE MESSAGE NOW!
GUARD: Fine! (She stomps up a set of stairs towards to heros grumbling something about 'Shooting the messenger).
DIRK: (Grasping Amuletts by the colar and shaking her) You will apologise!
MARTIN: Is it out?
CLODIN: Yes, but in future it might be better if you didn't help me!
GUARD: Excuse me? Lady Tinuvielle?