So, the messenger delivers her message (if you thought she was a man you are forgiven.  I drew her pretty androgynous to add to her mystery.  But in page 1, frame 8 you can see the curve of her left boobie).  In case you haven’t guessed she is a lead-in character, and you probably won’t see her again.  That said she has quite a strong personality and I will miss her.  She is determined and practical.

Not there are a lot of mistakes on this page.  “Shoot mess-anger” is one, Tinuvielle’s left arm is another.  I won’t point out the others.  Perhaps you won’t notice them. Mistake fixed!

↓ Transcript
MESSENGER: Please? I bring message? For hero?
GUARD: I will take it... once the ceremony is over.
GUARD: Fine! (She stomps up a set of stairs towards to heros grumbling something about 'Shooting the messenger).

DIRK: (Grasping Amuletts by the colar and shaking her) You will apologise!
MARTIN: Is it out?
CLODIN: Yes, but in future it might be better if you didn't help me!
GUARD: Excuse me? Lady Tinuvielle?

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